“To wander in the 21st century, unfortunately, is to court death.” – Ben Goldfarb, paragraph 2
This powerful statement comes from the article, written in the Atlantic on November 26, 2019, titled “How Roadkill Became an Environmental Disaster” by Ben Goldfarb. The article focuses on a threatened species; Myrmecophaga tridactyla, otherwise known as the giant anteater, and the struggle they face with sharing their natural environment with the behemoth that is the BR-262 highway in southern Brazil. Anteaters are a species endemic to South America, and their range spans across several countries, starting at southern Brazil all the way to Colombia, and even crossing Panama into North America, ending in Honduras and El Salvador. The article discusses the trails and tribulations these large mammals must navigate in their day-to-day lives, with the highway being a large source of fatalities for their already waning population. But the article doesn’t just cover giant anteaters, it describes every species of animal in the region that has perished at the hands of human development. From capybaras, caimans, hawks and even armadillos, no animal is safe from the constant threat of death that has recently situated itself in their environment.
This is a topic I unfortunately have some personal experience in, and most likely many others, as well. Ever since I started learning how to drive in 2018, I have accidentally hit 2 deer, a couple squirrels, and even a chipmunk at one point, and I’ve only been driving for about 7 years. Avoiding these scared and frantic creatures is an impossible task, depending on what position they’re in relative to my car when they try to cross the road. However, I do remember some last-ditch efforts I’ve made to swerve around them and successfully spare their lives. Ben Goldfarb cites some depressing statistics in his article; roads have become the number one “leading direct human cause of vertebrate mortality on land” surpassing hunting by a large margin. According to Goldfarb, “the most cited estimate pegs America’s roadkill toll at 1 million critters a day” (paragraph 9). Not only that, but in Brazil, a citizen-science roadkill app called “Sistema Urubu”, invented by Alex Bager, has estimated that more than 400 million Brazilian animals are struck down by cars annually. This article really made me think about my contribution to the statistics of animal deaths in a more profound and philosophical way. I may have only hit a small handful of different animals, but when everyone has had experiences like I have, that handful turns into an entire population. I can’t think about it too hard though, because, just like Brazilian wildlife veterinarian Mario Alves is quoted saying:
“I’m sad about the situation,” Alves said. “Not about each animal that I see. Or I would be”—he glanced skyward, casting for an English phrase—“under depression.” – Mario Alves, paragraph 7
Along with countries that already have highways, certain countries that don’t have modern roads have started developing them at an incredible rate, and the species in the area aren’t doing well to adapt to these new changes in their habitat. Goldfarb poses the question of the century: “Having profited wildly from a century of infrastructural growth, can the developed world deny other countries the benefits of connectivity?” (paragraph 59). While I agree with Goldfarb pointing this out, I believe the issue is more complicated than that. It’s not that developing countries are having a worse effect on their local ecosystems than developed countries, it’s just that they’re now catching up to the mortality rates that developed countries have had for quite some time. Either way, the introduction of roads and highways creates a pressing issue for the animals that must cross them to get to their homes.
All this saddening information poses a deeper question; how do we stop this? The first thing we must ask ourselves, is how did it get this way? In today’s modern society, cars have become a rite of passage, then a habit, then an obligation. It is nearly physically impossible to avoid using a motorized vehicle in this day and age. Especially when you live in a rural area. Humans need cars to transport them everywhere; from work, to school, to their favorite recreational area, to their friend’s house, and home, just to wake up the next day to do it all over again. In the past, we had trains and boats, before that we had horses, and before that, all we had were our legs. All these advances in the technology of transportation were created to allow people to travel further and explore more territory, decreasing travel time and most importantly, expending less effort. Over time, our towns and cities were shaped by these technological advances, and now we’ve put ourselves in a position where we just can’t live without cars. It’s ingrained in every aspect of our society.
So how do we stop it? Unfortunately, I don’t think we can fully stop animal deaths by motor vehicles. It’s just the unpleasant reality that in order for humans to live a life of comfort and ease, with our transportation taking us farther than any species in the animal kingdom has walked in its life, we choose to use cars. However, this doesn’t mean we must sacrifice our morality. The only thing we can do is mitigate the effects of roads on our ecosystem. Goldfarb explains that there are many ways to reduce the amount of deaths from roads every year, with a combined effort of legislation, monitoring, education, and the installation of wildlife crossings. The biggest issue with roads is that they fragment the natural habitat of many species. Goldfarb said “In a 2018 study, Clara Grilo and others found that habitat fragmentation by roads posed a graver threat than direct mortality” (paragraph 44). Wildlife crossings help connect their fragmented habitats, lessening the number of interactions an animal has with the road, and giving it a lower chance of coming into contact with a fast-moving car. Another solution is to put up fences and barriers the animals can’t cross. An article titled “Fences best at reducing roadkill”by Dana Kobilinsky at The Wildlife Society, quoted Jochen Jaeger, who said “’While fences are the most effective’, Jaeger said, ‘they ought to include areas where animals can cross’. If you fence the road entirely and have no crossing structures on the road, the animals can’t recolonize empty habitats’” So if we have roads with fences, combined with wildlife crossings, we can vastly reduce animal mortality from cars. Goldfarb also makes the case that monitoring the animals in a certain habitat can help people get a better idea of what struggles said animals must face and can also contribute to educating the population about how dangerous cars can be to them, thus motivating capable people to better protect them. Education and legislation go hand-in-hand, because an educated population is more likely to support legislation to lessen the effects that roads have on the ecosystem. Basically, you have to get the general population to care. Goldfarb states “More than conservation, then, safety—and liability—has motivated road managers to install fences and crossings” (paragraph 51), which I agree with, because one of the key motivators in getting the general population to care, is to highlight how roadkill not only effects the animals that perish, but can also lead to humans perishing as well.
Researching this issue has opened my eyes to the unfortunate truth of our modern society, and even made me think about the human condition, and how we humans seldom care about the issues we create for other organisms. There are only two ways to solve animal mortality rates at the hands of cars: create new technology that improves transportation in a way that doesn’t endanger animals, or settle for the transportation we have now and just try to work within the boundaries of our car centered infrastructure to keep as many animals safe as we can. The more I learn about this subject, the more I come to the realization that modern human society has an almost completely negative effect on our environment. However, there is always a positive side. With new advances in technology, come new issues, and new ways to solve such issues. Human ingenuity will always invent ways to solve the issues we create. Many people don’t care about the issues that face other organisms, but there are just as many who do. The best thing we can do is care.
Works Cited:
- Goldfarb, Ben. “How Roadkill Became an Environmental Disaster” The Atlantic, November 26, 2019, { https://www.theatlantic.com/science/archive/2019/11/roads-brazil-giant-anteaters/602587/ } [Accessed 0ctober 22, 2025]
- Kobilinsky, Dana. “Fences best at reducing roadkill” The Wildlife Society, May 1, 2017, { https://wildlife.org/fences-best-at-reducing-roadkill/ } [Accessed October 22, 2025]






















































































#1 by derekoliveira on October 27th, 2025
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Hello Kaleen, I just wanted to begin by saying that the quote “To wander in the 21st century, unfortunately, is to court death.” – Ben Goldfarb really set the tone for the essay and started you off by grasping at the severity of the situation right away, I think it had a powerful effect.
The first paragraph is solid, and the word choice ties it together to be well-developed. Two sentences start with the phrase “the article” and I feel like a different variation would create an overall better sense, but that might just be my view on it. Listing all the animals really sums up that even though the article focuses on one animal, the problem is widespread throughout, which ties in to that quote as enhancing the severity of the situation.
The personal story allows for a connection that other readers can relate to, tying them in to the reading more. The second paragraph to me really serves as the general understanding of what the article will be about to the reader as it explains the danger of roads to the animals for the reader to understand, and shows how to both the drivers and animals that a danger is apparent.
The third paragraph seems to serve as the controversial opinions on roads, and how countries that had little to none are expanding to have more paved roads. This serves as the pivotal argument Goldfarb latches to since they deserve to have more connectivity but at the risk of harming the environment. I feel that you could expand more upon the effect that these roads would have on the animals, and also taking a dive into the effects on the people as well, as Goldfarbs point in the article was that there is a mutual danger for both the drivers and animals on these roads.
The fourth paragraph seems to stem from the sheer normality that cars are in daily life, serving as a point that everyone experiences. This might just be my opinion, but the wordy explanations of the uses for cars doesn’t really connect to the summary and had me confused at first since it didn’t add to the overall point of roadkill. I feel like the advances in technology is a good point to focus on since the article directly mentions that as well.
The fifth paragraph beginning with the question that began the fourth seems a little off to me. I feel as if the question shouldn’t be mentioned in the earlier paragraph since it goes unanswered and at the very least, doesn’t really connect to the point of technological advancements which is what the focal point of that paragraph is on. This paragraph has your own writing and the article mixed well together, but I feel there are too many direct quotes, as the assignment for the essay states there should only be a few, it seems like a few of the direct quotes used in this paragraph can be switched to paraphrasing as they don’t need to be specifically quoted to add the same effect you want. I do think that the fact that you mentioned the solutions within was very nice since it tied well to the quote before it.
The final paragraph is a good conclusion as it ties in all the previous mentioned aspects and adds the thought that humans are the ones in control to fix this problem, but most simply don’t care, which leaves the reader with something to think about. Mentioning the contrast in people, the ones that help, and the ones that don’t care, was a powerful move since it really has me thinking about what can be done and how most of the population has a negative effect which overshadows the people trying to fix the mess of the other side.
Overall this is a really well written essay, there were a few small fixes I suggested, but they might just be my view on suggestions. You did a great job.
#2 by hpappas on November 4th, 2025
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I esp appreciate your engagement here and the thoughtfulness of your response to the article and issue! Summary is accurate and fairly complete (though it does seem a bit less well-developed than response, which to me is the real strength of this essay. I especially like parts about ethical considerations.). Writing is clear throughout.
I agree with peer reviewer that the quote is a good way to start (though I’d cut out most of that bibliographic info, which slows down pace, and publication info can be found in Works Cited anyway). I did note in reading that para focuses on road kill, and that’s not the only problem (see my comment about fragmentation below).
The main thing that concerns me here is structure, with your constant interweaving of summary and response. It *is* clear everywhere (almost) which parts are summary and which response, but I do find it a little bit of an effort to put pieces of article together. I talked about two options being to give full summary and then full response OR to give a bit of summary, then a bit of response, etc. You don’t seem to do either quite. It would demand quite a bit of restructuring to adjust, though, and perhaps you like the effect?? At any rate, think about it (I’m not insisting, just suggesting). The one place where it esp struck me was when you mention, in the para abut biggest issue being how do we stop, that the most crucial issue is not road kill but fragmentation (it seems to come in very late for a main problem).
(This is my engaging in conversation, not making teacherly comments so much. At end of essay I felt it was a strong move to say that human effects on environment almost all negative, but you back away from that *very* quickly, which i was sorry to see—it *does* seem like a valid point to make that I’d be glad to hear more about. I’m not so sure that human ingenuity will always provide solutions, cf. prospect of nuclear warfare).
In terms of citation, it’s not standard to include para nos. for in-text citation (I’m personally not going to count 58 paras—if source is electric, I’m going to control-F to find quote). Also, there are some formatting issues to address in Works Cited: no colon after heading, and no numbering of entries; period inside closed quote for article titles; initial caps for article titles, as you do for 1st one but not for 2nd; date format for MLA is 24 Apr. 2016–day month year, with abbreviated months except for May, June, and July; no square brackets around Access date.